Post by iheartthedoctor on Jan 9, 2011 16:09:49 GMT -5
it all came to me in a dream (you should of read that in an eerie voice btw)
it's all brief bullet points cause that's just how i get ideas out hopefully it makes sense.
Bella is driving back to forks age: mid 20s
Meets Edward and gives him a ride
They get to know each other a little
They stop off in some small town and visit a pub
They meet an old bloke that knows Edward…. Old bloke isn’t the sanest of people
Edward claims the old bloke is his granddad
Bella is talking to old bloke about his past and ‘metaphorical’ deaths
Old man is really old…. Older than he looks I say he’s about like 90 but looks like 70 so bella is slightly amazed
He says when his childhood died and then when ‘he’ died.
Bella claims to be older than his grandson but she gets a chuckle from him
The old man goes on about some amazing adventures he’d had
Edward is oddly quiet for most of it
Bella is a little tipsy and gets emotional
She says if she could of she would of taken off with the old man to go on adventures with him to get away from her life
She says about when her childhood died (maybe witnessing something traumatic or someone died, divorce whatever)
And when ‘she’ died not long ago and is the reason shes heading back to forks (heartbroken? Someone else died?… don’t know)
Edward speaks up then and comforts her
Old man starts talking to the next person in the bar while Edward talks to bella
Edward isn’t the old mans grandson
Edward isn’t human
Neither is said old man
None of this would be revealed for a while though
Edward changed the old man many years ago when he was dying because the old man begged him to
So Edward’s childhood died when his parents got ill… he died in 1918
Obviously there would be more plot…. Like more with the travelling and getting to know each other and building a relationship then more plot after meeting the old man. Then something happens that forces Edward to reveal his true nature and bella feel betrayed and whatnot and yeah…. More plot… like something is trying to kill bella and Edward has to protect her.
Maybe renee died when bella was a child… she went to live with her gran some where shes gone back to forks because Charlie has died… turns out both deaths were suspicious and now they’re after bella…. Thus protection from vamp ward… but something happened where bella was too… like she got cheated on so even more reason to go to forks to sort stuff out… tis also an escape because everything happened at once
so yeah doesn't really make much sense lol but tbh the dream was just one scene that an idea sort of sprang from, looking at the notes now it's a bit like ethan church by dryler so whoever adopts this i hope tries to distance the plot from that as much as possible so it's a nice unique story
it's all brief bullet points cause that's just how i get ideas out hopefully it makes sense.
Bella is driving back to forks age: mid 20s
Meets Edward and gives him a ride
They get to know each other a little
They stop off in some small town and visit a pub
They meet an old bloke that knows Edward…. Old bloke isn’t the sanest of people
Edward claims the old bloke is his granddad
Bella is talking to old bloke about his past and ‘metaphorical’ deaths
Old man is really old…. Older than he looks I say he’s about like 90 but looks like 70 so bella is slightly amazed
He says when his childhood died and then when ‘he’ died.
Bella claims to be older than his grandson but she gets a chuckle from him
The old man goes on about some amazing adventures he’d had
Edward is oddly quiet for most of it
Bella is a little tipsy and gets emotional
She says if she could of she would of taken off with the old man to go on adventures with him to get away from her life
She says about when her childhood died (maybe witnessing something traumatic or someone died, divorce whatever)
And when ‘she’ died not long ago and is the reason shes heading back to forks (heartbroken? Someone else died?… don’t know)
Edward speaks up then and comforts her
Old man starts talking to the next person in the bar while Edward talks to bella
Edward isn’t the old mans grandson
Edward isn’t human
Neither is said old man
None of this would be revealed for a while though
Edward changed the old man many years ago when he was dying because the old man begged him to
So Edward’s childhood died when his parents got ill… he died in 1918
Obviously there would be more plot…. Like more with the travelling and getting to know each other and building a relationship then more plot after meeting the old man. Then something happens that forces Edward to reveal his true nature and bella feel betrayed and whatnot and yeah…. More plot… like something is trying to kill bella and Edward has to protect her.
Maybe renee died when bella was a child… she went to live with her gran some where shes gone back to forks because Charlie has died… turns out both deaths were suspicious and now they’re after bella…. Thus protection from vamp ward… but something happened where bella was too… like she got cheated on so even more reason to go to forks to sort stuff out… tis also an escape because everything happened at once
so yeah doesn't really make much sense lol but tbh the dream was just one scene that an idea sort of sprang from, looking at the notes now it's a bit like ethan church by dryler so whoever adopts this i hope tries to distance the plot from that as much as possible so it's a nice unique story